Stepmom - part 3

Good

5 stars

This was an amazingly well planned story. The characters were developed well. The art was extraordinary. Just the right amount of sensuality and sexuality.

I'll try and keep this review concise and focused since I tend to ramble when I write/speak about something I am passionate about and my meaning becomes lost to my audience and myself. Pros: Jennifer: As always this big and beautiful woman is the star and pillar that holds this story up. As is the case really with all the stories featured on this site but in particular here because of the unique attitude and atmosphere present in the character and the story. Both have felt grounded from the beginning and that bought a sense of relatability and realness to the character. It makes her all the more enticing and desirable for me and is a big factor in why I look forward to this series with such fervor. I continue to be fond of her committment to and love for Adrian. It increasingly endears her to me and makes her that much more attractive as well as her physical apperance. Speaking of physical appearance Jennifer's ponytail look is great. It adds to that level of belivability seeing her change hairstyles and as an aside it's super sexy. The ART: The figures are aesthetically pleasing and the lighting is used very effectively and impressively (speaking as someone who struggles mightly with lighting). Jennifer looks beautiful as always and I have always loved the detail of the scar under her left eye. I read on deviantart that you planned to explain that and I look forward to that. The guys also look good. You put enough detail and care into them that they don't come off as lifeless mannequins which hurts other 3D stories in my opinion. The SEXY: Jennifer just being generally huge? Yes. I love seeing the contrast between her enormity and Adrian's normal sized home. You get a great sense of scale. She is taller than the bedroom door and too tall to comfortably wash the dishes and it's all so exciting. I love her attire as well; I love tight clothes over muscular women and seeing her stretch the fabric with her actions. Also the size of her breasts are simply ridiculous in the best way. Like her breasts are huuuuuuge! The cover really emphasised this fact which I already knew but came to appreciate here. She is really big. Her lifting Adrian like nothing was awesome. Her light domination was sexy and sweet. Having her way with Adrian while Zach watched was very compelling and the contrasts in physiques NEVER get old. Cons: The Overall Narrative: Honestly I feel the story going into familiar territory which I'm a bit disappointed by especially considering the wait. I know it's not fair to blame the story for my crazy high expectations brought on by myself but I have to be honest. What appeals to me about this series is how it felt mostly unknowable. I wasn't sure which direction it could go which had alot to do with Jennifer's generally kind disposition. Now she has a target for her meaner side in Zach and I can't help but begin to feel I've read this story before from this very site. I'd also think the story would benefit from not so much reactionary behaviour and jumping from sexy time to sexy time but having an overarching and end goal instead of just things that happen. I'm very happy that you will explore more about Jennifer and her scar and i would encourage you to try and adopt that mentality with all facets of the story. The world feels abit too vague and isolated which some of your other stories do as well but it doesn't hurt so much there because it doesn't feel too grounded to begin with. I feel this is a story that could benefit from some more breathing room, some minor world building and establishing some goals and overarching narrative. Also the narrative doesn't progress to much in a single chapter which was especially disappointing. With that said I do not regret buying or reading this for one second it's still great and I'm glad for your work and this series. I eagerly await Stepmom 4 and I hope the wait isn't nearly as long as it was for Stepmom 3. Last PLEASE whatever you do PLEASE DO NOT introduce another amazon into this story. Sometimes it's hot and other times it's frustrating and I think if it happened it this story it would be the latter. I'd just like the focus on Jennifer and her development. I think Joyce spins a very compelling tale in the training of Jeff Stintum on amazonlove that shows a good exmaple of developing a heroine while making her more sexier the more is revealed about her.

Good

Great story, love the boots that Jennifer has on. Hope to see her in stocking next time out. look forward to part 4, 5, and 6 etc. Hope it will be soon.

Amazing

Just read this comic. Great story which develops in a realistic way. The images are great, the girl has a fabulous body and it's drawn realistic. I like these comics. It's a vice to enjoy them, but as a book I have 'bad behavior built civilization' (by Robert Evans - A (Brief) History of Vice.

Third part of the story, Jennifer goes into the next step of domination with Adrian. It's the beginning for Zach into domination by Jennifer. Awesome job, even on next chapters it just keeps getting better and better.

I really love your work! However I love tall women ducking through doorways and in some of your illustrations a 7ft woman with heals is as tall as a 6'7 doorway. l Love comparing a large woman to the smaller things, cars, furniture, doors other people, etc. If you could keep this in mind for me it won't throw me out of your wonderful world.

Jennifer is an absolute stepGODDESS! I love how her emotional struggles make the story feel very vibrant. She clearly loves Adrian, yet is so aroused by her power over his son and knows that neither of them could stop them from doing whatever she wants to them. Very curious and already eagerly waiting to see how this situation unfolds!

Following up on the twist of the last episode, chapter 3 will reveal the true dominant side of our favorite stepmom... great action, and I have to say, Jennifer looks amazing in the scene with her boyfriend... physical and psychological domination...

for me a retired artist myself (KAKAKA) . jstiliton is currently the top artist in this industry. he masters everything in digital art with a genius mind as he writes his excellent stories . I strongly recommend all his stories as he doesn't have a single weak one, and for myself I hope one day i could read all his wonderful stories . thanks alot my friend

I couldn’t agree more with Vakyrie2Cain’s review. I feel almost exactly the same with the pros and cons. What I really liked with the two first episodes was Jennifers gentle style, despite her size and strength. I nice alternative to many of the other stories with aggressive and dominant girls who talks about her strenght and the mans weakness. Overall a good story, though.